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9:50 PM, Thursday July 1st 2021
I can see some wobbling with your lines. I can see you make an arch with longer lines, too.
It seem to me you have a problem with making the elippses touch their boundaries, particularly in the tables exercise. With smaller ellipses I see some wobbling and deformation, too.
In the planes exercise, I can see they touch the borders mostly well, but they sometimes deform.
With your rough perspective - I see you draw the sides that are supposed to converge parallel, or make them not converge enough.
In the rotated boxes exercise, this box could follow the other one's side more - https://i.imgur.com/0svkIB1.png. I believe the uppermost and lowermost boxes shouldn't have this side seen https://i.imgur.com/68Vx7Vy.png. I think it should look something like this: https://i.imgur.com/xBIiG36.png, such a box was also in this exercise's example.
As for the organic perspective, be careful with diverging lines (by making the silhouette with diverging lines, you're essentially drawing the inside of a box and not its outside: https://i.imgur.com/VXi6qA2.png) and tangents (https://i.imgur.com/xCQZ0U4.png).
Next Steps:
Either way, I think you can move onto the 250 boxes challenge, as you'll work on your lines and sense of convergence there and the mistakes you've made aren't from misunderstanding the exercises.
5:55 PM, Monday July 5th 2021
Thank you very much for your feedback!!
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7:42 PM, Thursday September 2nd 2021
hi, good work. i think you did a good job doing most of the homework, i can see you had a bit of trouble (same with me) with the rough perspective, some of the vanishing points aren't landing on the horizon line. the rest of it is good!
Next Steps:
either revisit rough perspective OR continue to the next challenge!
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5:27 PM, Thursday October 12th 2023
very good
Next Steps:
250 box
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