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4:18 AM, Sunday December 5th 2021
Hello! I am Doctormein. I'll be critiquing your Superimposed Line Today.
Superimposed Lines
Wobbling.
There are not much wobbling here as far as i am concerned which is great it show that you are trying your best to draw the line confidently.
Fraying on both ends.
Some of the long lines have Fraying on both end So i think you should partially focus on that too.
Accuracy
Accuracy could be improved but this will get better with times.
Conclusion
The Exercise is Nicely done. And while mistake above that i mentioned should be fixed. You should still move on and do the entire lesson 1. even if the result comes out badly. The mistake i mentioned above should be fixed via warmup. So remember DO NOT GRIND.
*For the Partial Submission you can post an image of the assignment onto the Discord server Which will do most of the heavy lifting for partial submission.
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4:28 AM, Sunday December 5th 2021
okay thank you for your reply. I've done the entirety of lesson one, however I did not get each exercise that I did critiqued. thank you for critiquing this one to start out.
4:42 PM, Sunday December 5th 2021
If you've done all of lesson 1 (including the lines, ellipses and box sections) then be sure to submit all of that in 1 submission (not a partial submission). That way it'll show up in the list and someone can critique you.
8:35 PM, Sunday December 5th 2021
okay will do.
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