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11:43 PM, Friday March 10th 2023
Hi here is my critique I hope it helps you
Lesson 1
Lines
In the exercises with lines your lines are confident which is important and you do it very well there is only a bit of arching in super imposed lines but in the most part is a very good job.
Ellipses
Your ellipses are confident first of all and you do it very precise also you take your time in the exercises and you read very well the lessons good job.
Boxes
In the boxes section you understood very well the concept of a vanishing point and you applied very well in the exercises, but there are a bit of mistakes one is that you’re not meant to do more work than the asked por the lesson and you do it in the lessons several times. Other thing is that in the organic perspective exercise you do in my opinion less boxes than the asked for.
Next Steps:
You do It very well you only need to wait 3 people to agree my critique to move on. You understand very well all the concepts so you can move on.
4:32 PM, Monday March 13th 2023
Thank you so much for the feedback! It's really helpful :)
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