Your ellipses look like they are on the right track. They will tighten up over time. My main feedback is to put more effort into making them touch the borders of boxes you are putting them in.

Most of my feedback is related to markmaking and line quality:

  • For the ghosted lines, I noticed you were making fairly large dots for your points, which was distracting and hurting the accuracy of the lines you were making since the space that you could start your intial mark in was so vast. Looks like you stopped doing that, so good job. Still sometimes they come out as tiny lines or ovals rather than points, which suggests you are rushing this part, and not thinking super thoughtfully about dot placement. Try and slow down and think about this more.

  • A lot of your lines have a curvature to them. You might be going a little too fast. Try drawing and ghosting just a little slower. Look to the point you are drawing to as you make your mark.

  • Some of the lines are also off on both points, which means you need to take more time to line up your line on the initial point before you make your mark. Don't rush this.