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6:58 PM, Wednesday December 21st 2022
Hello I’ll be handling the critique for your lesson 3 homework.
Organic Arrows :
-Starting with the organic arrows you are doing some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon and you’ve also drawn your marks with confidence. It seems that you are both aware of how the arrow gets wider as it moves closer to the viewer, and the fact that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon decreases as it moves further away. I don’t really have anything to call out here but keep aware of the negative space let’s move on to the next section.
Leaves :
-Moving on to the leaves you are doing a good job with the first two steps, that is drawing the flow line and the edges for the silhouette. and one important step and that is drawing the edge details,
Branches :
try forking
-Moving on to the branches I think that you may followed the instructions as best as you could have.
there is not much to address here great job
Next Steps:
to lesson 4
1:49 PM, Thursday January 5th 2023
thanks for the critique
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