4:15 PM, Friday November 24th 2023
Hey! With what we talked about, here's my revisions!
Hey! With what we talked about, here's my revisions!
Nicely done! I can see you've put a little more thought into the revisions. I see there is a little overshooting in your lines. To fix this, try to intentionally lift your hand off the paper as you reach the end dot. Initially it might feel a little weird doing it but you will subconciously recognise what needs to be done and that you don't need to lift your hand much at all.
In practising these exercises as warm ups, I have no doubt the issues mentioned will improve over time. Specially when you get to the 250 boxes challenge. :)
With this I'll mark this homework as complete. Good luck for the future lessons and I wish you the best!
I can't edit my parent comment with the required revisions but just to note for anyone reading this in the future, I amended my revisions required to:
1 page of Ellipses in Planes
Half a page of Rough Perspective
Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.
Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.
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