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10:30 AM, Saturday January 22nd 2022

Hello SHARAD! I'll be reviewing your home work.

LINES

All of your lines homeworks are pretty GOOD! some work can be done on super imposed curves.

ELLIPSE

Ellipse are good as well! in Ellipses in Plane Ex. don't worry about touching all the 4 sides cause sometimes it'll make ellipses little distorted.

BOXES

Plotted perspective Ex. are done beautifully!

Rough perspective Ex. there I can see you had a hard time but it'll get better with practice.

I can see your boxes are rotating in Rotated Box Ex. good work there!

Lastly Organic Perspective Ex. it's good that foreshortening is minimum and I can see that smaller are far and lager are near.

Next Steps:

1 page of Ellipses in plane (OPTIONAL)

2 page of Rough Perspective

1 page of Organic Perspective

Take your time and do these as good as you can ^-^

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:46 PM, Saturday January 22nd 2022

thanks you sir it's very helpful ill make sure to complete this set of exercise as soon as possible

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