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10:30 AM, Saturday January 22nd 2022

Hello SHARAD! I'll be reviewing your home work.

LINES

All of your lines homeworks are pretty GOOD! some work can be done on super imposed curves.

ELLIPSE

Ellipse are good as well! in Ellipses in Plane Ex. don't worry about touching all the 4 sides cause sometimes it'll make ellipses little distorted.

BOXES

Plotted perspective Ex. are done beautifully!

Rough perspective Ex. there I can see you had a hard time but it'll get better with practice.

I can see your boxes are rotating in Rotated Box Ex. good work there!

Lastly Organic Perspective Ex. it's good that foreshortening is minimum and I can see that smaller are far and lager are near.

Next Steps:

1 page of Ellipses in plane (OPTIONAL)

2 page of Rough Perspective

1 page of Organic Perspective

Take your time and do these as good as you can ^-^

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2:46 PM, Saturday January 22nd 2022

thanks you sir it's very helpful ill make sure to complete this set of exercise as soon as possible

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11:56 PM, Sunday January 23rd 2022
edited at 11:58 PM, Jan 23rd 2022

Wow your lines are soooo straight. Good job! Confident lines.

edited at 11:58 PM, Jan 23rd 2022
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4:21 PM, Sunday January 23rd 2022

Your lines very good!)

I think you have completed all the exercises well and with understanding and you can proceed to the next step.

Next Steps:

250 box challenge

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8:11 PM, Sunday January 23rd 2022

thanks

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7:17 PM, Saturday September 30th 2023

Indeed, very good work! I think that you are ready to advance, in fact.

Some small work yet to go on the perspective boxes, but this will come with time. Keep doing it from time to time to see your own progress.

As other mention, the best of your work is the confidence in the lines. I guess you are really doing it from the arm, not from the hand. If you want to go one step further on your lines, start playing to variations of the weight.

Have fun in lesson 2.

Next Steps:

Have fun on lesson 2. Or with the rest of the 250 boxes :D.

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