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11:03 AM, Saturday February 11th 2023

Hello! You're doing better now with the organic intersections so good job! You are being more careful with the contour lines and the forms look more stable now!

Lastly about the horse, a few things:

It looks mostly solid, but you aren't drawing every single form individually, for example the legs of the horse aren't divided in simple organic forms, you are drawing them directly as complex forms. Make sure you always approach everything on drawabox by starting with simple forms and then building up complexity from there. Here's an example on your horse. If you need more masses you can add them using additional forms like this.

This approach is explained on the demos, so give a reread to the donkey demo for example to see what im talking about

Second thing is that detail makes it a bit hard to see what you've actually done on the drawing, so try to either skip on detail, or take a photo before adding detail (cast shadows, texture etc) so it's clear what you were trying to do with the drawing.

So! Overall you're doing a good job, but I'll ask you to do one more horse drawing to make sure you understood what I just explained, good luck!

Next Steps:

1 more horse drawing (remember to either not draw detail or to take a photo before adding detail)

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
9:54 AM, Tuesday February 14th 2023

a question do u want me to put some cast shadows in or do you want me to draw only construction???

10:54 PM, Thursday February 16th 2023

Only construction, sorry for the late answer, I got sick

8:53 PM, Saturday February 18th 2023

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16w6XN8Y4Lu7XcuT4ALNzMqcmJ6_ENPgw?usp=share_link

I tried to do my contructions with less just cast shawdows to emphassis form

6:36 PM, Monday February 20th 2023

Hello! I still can't see well your construction so could you do one more page without shadows at all? Because of how you're drawing it's hard to see your construction, the reason I asked you to draw without shadows and texture is because it's making it for me more difficult to see what you're actually doing. And don't do several drawings on a page, do just one horse and on a simpler pose if possible, a 3/4 or side view, try avoiding front views.

I think you're doing a better job with the forms but still it's hard for me to see, so please do one more drawing like I asked! Good luck!

Next Steps:

1 more drawing with 0 shadows of a horse in a simple pose

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
11:09 AM, Sunday March 5th 2023

I am so sorry for making you wait for so long. My exams are a real pain in the backside

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17xeAuyoC76b6xzrToj5cILMe0FsQFuGW/view?usp=drivesdk

Will this one do???

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2:17 PM, Friday March 10th 2023

hey elodin I finished the revision. Can you check it for me???

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