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7:03 PM, Saturday July 25th 2020
Your lines aren't meeting their end points. The first few exercises are fine, but in some of the planes exercises and the rough/organic perspective exercises, your lines are tapering off before they meet the corners. This indicates you could be lifting your hand too early, before you're actually done drawing the line, or possibly drawing the line too fast without an actual end point in mind. I'd say it's probably better to overshoot a line than undershoot it. No need to redo anything, just something to keep in mind for the future.
The ellipses look good and consistent, good job.
Next Steps:
Work on the 250 box challenge, if you haven't yet!
Pentel Pocket Brush Pen
This is a remarkable little pen. I'm especially fond of this one for sketching and playing around with, and it's what I used for the notorious "Mr. Monkey Business" video from Lesson 0. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
I would not recommend this for Drawabox - we use brush pens for filling in shadow shapes, and you do not need a pen this fancy for that. If you do purchase it, save it for drawing outside of the course.