1:48 AM, Wednesday September 23rd 2020
Okeydoke. Here's my two cents.
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Your leaf forms are great for the most part
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Be careful with the leaf's contour lines so as not to undermine your initial form. If the contour doesn't add anything useful, don't draw it.
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Arrows are spot on and give a real sense of depth and gesture.
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Make sure to work additively with leaves so you can bring out their silhouettes with more impact.
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Your 'plants outside my house' section seemed to be a little lazy with form and contours. But then again, drawing from life is far more difficult than drawing from a 2D reference image. Also be sure to take advantage of line weight and cast shadows a little more to help clarify sections with lots of lines.
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Don't be too repetitive with silhouette lines. This may detract from a drawing's natural feel.
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Your page with the Sunflower is looking great.
I can tell you have improved during this lesson. I found that, for me, the next couple of lessons really solidified the techniques introduced here and so I think you will benefit greatly from moving on.
Next Steps:
Moving on will really help to amplify the methods learned here. I believe you are more than prepared to advance.