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12:08 PM, Saturday August 13th 2022

Helloo

Here it is the additional homework required

https://imgur.com/a/Jrze22M

I'm still not sure if i'm doing the cylinders in boxes quite right, it is a bit confusing to me.

Thanks a lot for the critique!

10:42 PM, Sunday August 14th 2022

These are definitely better. The biggest issue was that your error checking for the minor axis wasn't all there last time and that it was affecting how your cylinders came out in the end.

But I'm happy that you've addressed it and you even improved the foreshortening on your cylinders so good job with that.

Just make sure that your ellipses are touching all four sides of the plane while also making sure that the minor axis aligns with the vanishing point when doing cylinders in boxes as shown here.

That about covers everything I have to say. As a whole, you're moving in the right direction, so feel free to move onto lesson 6.

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