Hi Lerin!
Thanks for the insightful feedback! I’ll make a note of the things you pointed out and try to improve on them in the future.
Here are my revisions; https://imgur.com/a/oJIkkf5
I decided to do two pages of each so I could experiment with the points you made. Ghosting the second line on the Arrows task was a game changer! While doing the Organic Intersections I kept reminding myself to make them floppy.
Once again thanks for the feedback!
Harry
Welcome back!
Wow, I can already see the improvement! My arrows were quiet slanted when I started out as well so I'm happy you're improving so well! The organic intersections look great as well, it feels a lot more solid and grounded now.
Can't complain. I'd say you're ready for Lesson 3 now. Good luck and have fun! :D
Next Steps:
Lesson 3!
A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.
In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.
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