Hello Singingmute, thank you for getting back to me with your work.

In general, don't submit more work for revisions than what was assigned, it's unnecessary as if you're still running into trouble doing more pages might not necessarily fix it without the feedback of your critiquer, and might instead reinforce bad habits. You'll get plenty of time to revisit these exercises and hone your skills during your warm ups.

Moving onto your revisions your page of leaves is looking better than your initial attempt, I'm also happy to see that you're thinking through your mistakes and how to make your leaves look more natural, your edge detail also looks good.

For your branches it's good to see that you're following the instructions more closely, but remember that your new segment should start at the ellipse point of your branch, not just close to it but on top of it.

Your plant constructions are looking very solid, although it would have been good to see you making use of two different types of plants for your revisions in order to apply your skills to two different kinds of challenges.

Overall, your work is good and you're on track to getting a lot out of these exercises and I'm happy to see you're applying my feedback, as such I'm going to be marking this lesson as complete. Good luck in Lesson 4.