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8:44 AM, Friday January 27th 2023

hi you have done good job with branches but keep in mind what i said before

daisy demo u still not enclosed the leaf and some lines are wobbly and not drawn with confidant but overall its good just keep in mind what i said i see u forgot but its better than the first one

pothos the lines need more confidant as i see some wobble lines u need to close the leaf also here to the flow line i would recommand to observe ref and draw many times as u need to breack and solve each proplem noo need to interpret again what u solved just to have confidance so i need to see also one plant with leaf

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7:47 PM, Tuesday January 31st 2023

Here’s the plant with leaves, I chose a much simpler one and only did the construction.

https://imgur.com/a/11d9qE7

8:56 PM, Tuesday January 31st 2023

okay good job i can see some wobbly strokes on some leaves try to be more confidant and use ghosting method well done

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