Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction

6:44 PM, Thursday December 16th 2021

Lesson 2 - Google Drive

Lesson 2 - Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=12_HR4uSkx__3gk5exeOaQI2weJMBqsYR

Just finished Lesson 2!

The dissection part took me the longest but the intersection exercises was definitely the hardest. I know we shouldn't be focusing too much on the intersection itself, so I did finish drawing overlapping forms first, but since I was having lots of trouble imagining the forms intersecting, I used 3D modeling software to help me for the first two pages, and tried doing it from imagination for the rest. I would be grateful for any feedback you could offer! Thanks so much!

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8:17 PM, Saturday December 18th 2021

Hi Astrid I'll be handling the critique for your lesson 2 homework.

-Starting with your arrows you are doing an excellent job drawing confident lines, and keeping in ind the forshortening and the spacing between the zigzaging sections of the ribbon, your hatching lines show a good degree of care too so good job there.

  • My only observation here is that you draw lineweight only where it is needed, in the context of this course it is better to use it only on overlapping sections as shown here.

-Moving on to the organic intersections with contours, you are drawing your sausages according to the rules stated in the lesson, keep in mind that we want to avoid any overstretching, pinching and unequal size ends, Sometimes you'll draw unequally sized sausages, so avoid that, but in general you are moving in the right direction here.

  • You have drawn your ellipses confidently and fitting snugly within the sausages, also you have kept in mind the shifting degrees and alignment to the axis.

  • When drawing your contour curves remember that a few well placed ones will do a better job than many wobbly ones, your linework here seems confident though, so good job. Here your curves seem to have their degrees constant, so keep practicing.

-Moving on to the texture analysis, you show that your observatioanl skills are quite developed and your cast shadows seem very dynamic so I don't have much criticism to offer here.

-Your dissections are well done too,I'd also like to quickly direct you to this image which shows that when we're working with thin line like textures if we outline and fill the shadow we will create a much more dynamic texture than simply drawing lines.

-It's quite common for people to feel like they don't fully grasp the form intersections exercise, if you feel like you may fall into this category try not to stress too much. This exercise is just meant to get students to start thinking about how their forms relate to one another in 3D space, and how to define those relationships on the page. I think it is good that you used reference for your intersections, it is difficult to think about them at first, despite all of this I have to say that you have done an excellent jon in this exercise.

-Finishing this critique with the organic intersections, your forms begin to wrap around each other believably and you show again your understanding of the material taught in this lesson.

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You have done an excellent work so you can move on.

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12:05 PM, Sunday December 19th 2021

Thank you so much for such a long and detailed critique! It's really helpful,but I still have a few questions. First for the lineweight, just to make sure I understand the image correctly, does it mean that we should only use lineweigth on overlapping sections to indicate the shape with thicker line is in the front? And for the dissection part, would you mind elaborating on that? I was having some trouble with thin line-like texture, like the hairy arm and grass, they do feel chaotic and repetitive, but I haven't quite grasp how to show them using blocky shadow? Because what I saw on the reference did seem to be just lines and they did cast thin line-like shadow?

Thanks again for your help!I did struggle with giving the suasage a even shape, so I'll put more attention to that, and I'll definitely practice my coutour curves more during my future warmups. Much appreciated!

4:39 PM, Sunday December 19th 2021

-Regarding your first question, yes it helps a fair bit to focus your use of line weight on a specific task. Within the context of this course (given our limitations in the tools we're using here), it's generally most effective to focus the use of line weight on clarifying how different forms overlap one another. Cast shadows can definitely help with this, but line weight applied specifically where the overlaps occur (as shown in the reference I put above) is also an extremely useful tool.

-And now regarding th second question, the thing to keep in mind is that texture is not actually all that different from everything else we're doing here. Just like construction, it's about defining the relationships between different forms in 3D space. The only difference is that these forms are so small and numerous (usually) that if we used the same constructional techniques to capture them (explicit markmaking, outlining them in their entirety, drawing them directly, etc.) our drawings would just end up incredibly noisy.

This is what most students miss out on - they think, "well I'm just going to draw the shadows I see from my reference image", but this is incorrect. Drawing what you see in your reference does not mean you understand what is depicted there. It doesn't mean you've noted the presence of each little bump, of specific scratches, of specific cracks, etc. It simply means that you're mindlessly copying 2D information over from the 2D reference to your 2D drawing.

Instead, we strive to use the visual information in that reference (cast shadows among other things) to understand the nature of those forms, and then using that understanding we create our own shadows. Much of the time those shadows will match what's in the reference, but that's not really important. What matters is that those shadows define specific relationships. That their shapes are designed with purpose and intent, because you know what specific forms and surfaces are being linked through the shadow's creation.

Again - this is not easy, and the very fact that we can't outline the textural forms first before putting down our cast shadows makes it incredibly difficult. All the same, don't avoid it because it's hard. It will get easier to wrap your head aroud as you continue to build up your spatial skills via constructional exercises, but you'll develop it faster by attacking the problem from many angles. You have shown already that your observational skills are quite developed so at this point it is not a matter of skill, but it's more about how you approach it. I hope this clarifies your doubts, keep up the good work

4:59 PM, Sunday December 19th 2021

This is extremely useful and gives me a clearer understanding of the texture lesson, I'll try to develop my skill of perceiving texture as 3D shapes as I go on, can't tell you how grateful I am!

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