Great job on finishing L1! few things I want to note on your exercises -

- notes before we get into individual exercises - my key concern throughout the lesson is that you are going over your lines several times each to try and correct mistakes - keep in mind we want to do one stroke only, and only ever add one more stroke to reinforce contours in the box challenge, or to reinforce overlaps in the rest of our lessons up from L1

- as for individual exercises

**-** You have nice, confident and smooth lines in your superimposed lines, however we want to stay vigilant against fraying at the start of our lines, which will cause us to fray unnecessarily at the end of our lines, reducing our line quality - instead, focus on starting on (to the best of your ability) the exact same point for each line you put down

**-** good job on ghosted lines

**-** for your table of ellipses, you had some nice, evenly shaped ellipses, however I can also see some where you didn't ghost enough and carry that same confidence through, leading to wobbly, stiff shaped ellipses - keep in mind you should be ghosting as much as you need until you feel ready to do 2-3 passes on your ellipses, and to focus on smooth, evenly shaped ellipses which *aim* to hit within the bounds and each-other, but don't compromise on their smooth, evenly shaped qualities for that accuracy

**-** good job in your ghosted planes, you have nice confident lines

**-** ellipses in planes - these have the same concern as the tables, however showing some improvement in their confidence, so good job

**-** for funnels, my main concern is that it feels quite rushed. remember these are exercises, and you should be going into them patiently, taking your time, and ghosting as much as you feel you need to. You did well to maintain the vast majority of your ellipses to their minor axis, so good job, however make sure to take your time in the planning phase 

**-** for plotted perspective, and for your boxes in the box challenge, don't go back over your hatched lines, we only want to go over those once - if we go back over all our lines this many times it can easily hide mistakes, and this can reduce the quality of the critiques you receive - keep in mind for page formatting, that you should be separating your page into 3 boxes with small gaps between and on the edges of the paper, and this should be done in portrait view, the same rotation as your last organic perspective but separated into 3 rather than two.

**-** good job on rough perspective, same deal with page formatting as ^ 

**-** for rotated boxes, i'm again concerned with it being rushed, so remember to take your time. additionally, your boxes need narrow, consistently-sized gaps between each one of them, and to make sure that with each box outwards from the center, they rotate just a little bit more, having that horizontal set of lines come inwards towards each-other more-so in each box from the center out - you also need to draw through the boxes on every single box

**-** this is a good start, however note you should be filling out your frames more, you also did well to make sure your boxes were converging towards the same vanishing points, and while you did have some divergence, these are good quality for where you are. 

Marking this as complete, if you want to re-submit what's been asked of you you can still do it, just making sure you get the badge for completing Lesson 1