11:13 PM, Wednesday January 27th 2021
Nice Job on finishing lesson 3!
Arrows:
The arrows are drawn with nice, smooth lines and seem to sell the idea that they move through 3d space, with the arrows growing bigger or smaller to show how far it is. The only thing that would make it seem more believable would be the compression or shrinking of distance between curves as the arrow gets further away.
Leaves:
The leaves have very exaggerated curves, with smooth outer lines that show the twisting and overlap of the leaf.
Branches:
Some of the center lines of the branches are wobbly. The ellipses are drawn smooth and change degree, showing how the curves changes effectively. The lines are smooth and confident, and I can see you used the method in the instructioons to achieve smooth lines.
Plants:
The plants should have had 4 pages that were just construction, with no detail. The plants are drawn confidently and you followed your construction, which is the purpose of the exercise.
Great Job!
Next Steps:
Lesson 4 and beyond