2:16 PM, Thursday July 15th 2021
Thank you very much, i'll try to take more time in the future and add boxes to my daily warm-ups
Thank you very much, i'll try to take more time in the future and add boxes to my daily warm-ups
much better
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250 box challenge
first off i think you did pretty good
your lines are pretty good i think that you could ghost a little bit more though
you should probably re-read and re-do eclipses in planes
and for funnels remember to align your ellipses to the minor axis, it should fold in half evenly
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Ellipses in Planes
your lines are quite wobbly on some of the challenges
remember to ghost through your lines until you are confident that you can make the line, sometimes our lines won't always be as straight we want them to but we do want to prioritize confidence over accuracy and also remember to draw from your shoulder
for your ellipses make sure to try to hit every side of the box
and for funnels try to make sure that the ellipses would fold in half evenly as if it were cut down the line
and just remember to never draw over your lines
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one page of organic perspective please
overall pretty good i'd say
-lines are a bit wobbly, prioritize confidence over accuracy
-try to take your pen off of the paper at the end point when ghosting so you don't overshoot so much
-i think it would be better if you draw through your ellipses 2 times instead of 3
-i also think you should just ghost everything a little bit more overall especially on your eclipses
also i would like to see the other lessons you left out
Next Steps:
250 box challenge
much better
Next Steps:
250 box challenge
Thank you very much
Just wanted to say that i appreciate your honesty and hope that i did better this time https://imgur.com/gallery/xzhFYKv
i would say that you can move on and keep that in mind, but you should wait for other users to agree with the critique.
i feel like you didn't really understand the funnels exercise i would like it if you were to go back and try it again, be sure to pay attention to the text!
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Funnels
Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.
Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.
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