11:46 PM, Thursday December 4th 2025
Jumping right in with your arrows, phenomenal work. You've done a great job of focusing on a confident execution to lean into the fluidity with which your arrows move through space, and you've also conveyed a strong sense of depth in the scene by leaning into the application of foreshortening to both the positive and negative space of the structures.
Looking at your sausage forms with contour lines, you've similarly done well. You're clearly focusing on adhering to the characteristics of simple sausages (it's not perfect, but that's entirely normal - these will continue to improve with practice, we mainly just want to make sure you're aiming for the right characteristics), your contour lines are drawn confidently so as to achieve even shapes and appropriate curvatures, and you're clearly taking the shifting degree into consideration as you draw each contour line. Just one small thing to keep in mind - don't forget to draw through all of your ellipses two full times, as is required for all of the ellipses we freehand in this course - including the small ones at the tips of your sausages.
Continuing onto the texture section, one thing to keep in mind is that the concepts we introduce relating to texture rely on skills our students generally don't have right now - because they're the skills this entire course is designed to develop. That is, spatial reasoning. Understanding how the textural forms sit on a given surface, and how they relate to the surfaces around them (which is necessary to design the shadow they would cast) is a matter of understanding 3D spatial relationships. The reason we introduce it here is to provide context and direction for what we'll explore later - similarly to the rotated boxes/organic perspective boxes in Lesson 1 introducing a problem we engage with more thoroughly in the box challenge. Ultimately my concern right now is just how closely you're adhering to the underlying steps and procedure we prescribe (especially those in these reminders).
You've done a great job of leaning into this approach, both in your texture analyses and your dissections. Though there are a few spots where you still use one-off strokes (and so I'll give you the explanation I provide to students explaining why it's best to stick to that two-step methodology for all the textural marks we draw throughout this course), you did so far, far less than most, so I'm really pleased with your results here.
As for that explanation: while it's true that there are certainly going to be shadows that are cast that are so small they can't reasonably be executed using our two step methodology, in such cases it's better to actually leave them out, for the following reasons:
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A designed shape, despite not being something we can create quite as small as a one-off stroke, tapers in a more nuanced, delicate fashion, whereas a one-off stroke is more likely to end in a manner that feels more sudden. Thus, the shapes lean better into our goal of creating a gradient that transitions from black to white (and ultimately we have to pick a point for the shadows to drop off altogether anyway, so pushing a little farther with singular strokes isn't strictly necessary).
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Drawing in one-off strokes allows us to lean more into drawing directly from observation (as opposed to observing, understanding the forms that we see as they exist in 3D space, then creating shadows based on that understanding), which can be very tempting as it can allow us to create more visually pleasing things without all of the extra baggage of thinking in 3D. But of course, 3D spatial reasoning is the purpose of this course.
Moving onto the form intersections, this exercise serves two main purposes:
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Similarly to the textures, it introduces the problem of the intersection lines themselves, which students are not expected to understand how to apply successfully, but rather just make an attempt at - this will continue to be developed from lessons 3-7, and this exercise will return in the homework in lessons 6 and 7 for additional analysis, and advice where it is deemed to be necessary). The way in which you're drawing your intersection lines clearly shows that you're thinking through the way in which these forms relate to one another in 3D space - and you're honestly making really good headway, and are further along with this than most.
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The other, far more important use of this exercise (at least in the context of this stage in the course) is that it is essentially a combination of everything we've introduced thus far. The principles of linework, the use of the ghosting method, the concepts surrounding ellipses along with their axes/degrees, perspective, foreshortening, convergence, the Y method, and so forth - all of it is present in this exercise. Where we've already confirmed your general grasp of these concepts in isolation in previous exercises, it is in presenting it all together that can really challenge a student's patience and discipline, and so it allows us to catch any issues that might interfere with their ability to continue forward as meaningfully as we intend.
As to this latter point, you're similarly doing well - you're demonstrating a great deal of patience and care in applying all of the methodologies and strategies. There's just one quick point to call out - when drawing your cylinders, remember that you should not be defaulting to keeping any set of edges parallel on the page. This only occurs when the intent is for those edges (and in this case, the cylinders as a whole) to be oriented perpendicularly to the viewer's angle of sight. If that is not specifically your intent - and in this exercise it would not be, since we're rotating our forms arbitrarily in space - be sure to always include some minimal amount of visible convergence.
Lastly, your organic intersections are similarly coming along well. You're clearly thinking through how the forms drape over one another under the influence of gravity, and you're making good headway in considering how the cast shadows can be used to further emphasize those relationships.
All in all, great work! I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete. Keep up the great work!
Next Steps:
Feel free to move onto Lesson 3.






