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toucanlover17

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toucanlover17's Sketchbook

  • Sharing the Knowledge
    4:33 PM, Thursday July 8th 2021

    https://imgur.com/EINgHGY

    Luckily I found the original one I did! I lost it and couldnt find it when I first posted! xD

    Thank you so much for the critique!

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    6:18 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021

    Im really impressed with your work! You seemed to have really good control of your pen just by seeing the first assignment! One thing i would say is that for the guesswork perspective assignment (The one point one) Id make sure that you ghost some of your lines more? some look pretty wobbly. (I think I honestly made the same mistake to tbh) and also there are a few instences in which horizontal points on one side of the box are at an angle.

    Thats all I can think of at the moment! Great job!! keep up the good work!! :D its very clear that your are putting your all into this!!!

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    5:28 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021

    Im proud of you for completing lesson 1!!! :D For you id say is to practice alot of the things learned in the first part of the chapter (ghosting and overall line confidence) It def takes some milelage. as for the rest of it, some exersizes such as the rough perspective, rotated boxes, plotted perspective might need to be redone and the lessons revisted.

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    5:19 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021

    Looks good! I wish I could say more but I just finished lesson 1 myself! Id say for things that you could work on is... probably ellipses? they seem to be uneven and more blob like, but I know youll improve!! wishing you the best of luck!! :D

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    5:16 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021

    Only one page of the work is loading.

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    5:14 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021

    Great job!! I would say that your ellipses need alittle bit improvement though, because they seem to be leaning to one side more than the other. But other than that I cant find any errors, Keep up the good work!

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