2:25 AM, Thursday August 6th 2020
Thanks for the feedback and I appreciate that you did found the drawings appealing, albeit missing the mark.
I get your point about the softer/thinner lines. Actually, more than half of them are not with a different pen. I have simply worked a lot with line control and got caught up in trying to push for a light touch. Another factor that is a bit of a bother is that I live in a very dry place and pens dry up far too fast. I simply started rotating pens to get the most of out them (and used the dryer ones for the first lines for some pages, which I get was incorrect in hindsight). Whatever, I realise I diverged from the intended path :)
I have done an additional page with a brand new pen to make sure that I got to work with even lineweight (and pushed it a bit). Hopefully without repeating mistakes