5:34 PM, Monday May 25th 2020
Congratulations at completing lesson 1! Nice job!
Your lines overall are looking pretty good. Maybe you could take a little more time on ghosting so they feel more confident, because a few of them feels just a little bit wobbly.
You can also take your time at the start so you fray them in both ends. You just have to place your pen carefully at the beggining of each line so that doesn't happen.
ABout your elipses, a great deal of them are looking good, but I feel a little less confidence in them than with your lines. Some of them are a little bumby. You can also ghost a little more and put them down confidently, even if the firts results seem a little off, they get better with practice.
Your boxes are great too. Just apply the same line feedback!
You should make the 250 box challenge now