5:06 PM, Saturday October 2nd 2021
Hi, thanks for the crit!
Regarding the lineweight, I tried to ghost and do another line on top properly, however I feel that it doesn't make a huge difference. That is to say, the line doesn't get that much darker when I draw over it again with my .5 ink pen. Maybe I just need to press the tip down harder, or do the movement slower so more ink gets dispersed? I have a brush pen as well, but I don't think you're allowed to use it for lineweight so I avoided it.
I will try to do some textures in my warmups. Its hard to add details that wrap around the form properly, so doing some texture sausage might help.