10:10 PM, Tuesday June 8th 2021
Thanks a bunch for your in depth critique! Here are my revisions.
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seagull2
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seagull2's Sketchbook
2:40 AM, Sunday May 16th 2021
Here you go. Thanks for your help!
11:16 PM, Monday April 5th 2021
Thank you so much for your in depth critique! Here is my two pages: https://imgur.com/a/tsKeRQH
I noticed upon attempting further divisions, there is a lot of inconsistency, likely due to doing contours for both of these. I would like more advice on getting control and confident lines if you wouldn't mind. Thank you!
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