11:47 PM, Sunday November 22nd 2020
Hello ThatAlad, ill be judging your homework today.
Superimposed lines: they are good, lines fray only on one end and they dont curve much
Ghosted lines: lines are confident and mostly straight. Your accuracy is also pretty good
Ghosted planes: lines are straight, confident and accurate. Good job
Table of ellipses: ellipses look mostly good, but they are not always shaped smooth, as you try to fit them inside the borders, making them egg shaped. Its not much, but keep practicing this one
Ellipses in planes: very good, not many are misshaped
Funnels: some ellipses miss the minor axis and are misshaped, but its acceptable
Plloted perspective: not much to say, its correct tho you could have added couple more in each frame
Rough perspective: lines that dont go into the VP are parallel to the sides of the paper most of the time. The accuracy of converging lines will improve in the 250 boxes so dont worry that its "getting worse"
Organic perspective: now here i see couple problems. First the boxes become bigger and smaller almost at random, instead of them getting gratualy larger as they get closer to us. Second one is that some boxes have a very broken and incorrect shape. This will, again, improve with the 250 box challenge
Rotated boxes: here firstly, i have to tell you that you're not really supposed to be able to do this exercise. Now here i can see that most of the boxes fit pretty good and are rotating correctly. You shouldn't have hatched out the upper sides of the boxes as it just creates confusion. We just hatch the sides of the boxes that we only partialy see. Still pretty good
Congrats, you have sufficiently gone over lesson one and I mark it as complete. One suggestion I can give you is that you dont do these lessons and then just go and work only digitally. Graphic tablets are a whole another thing you would need to learn on top of the drawing fundamentals we do here. Personally I make sketches on paper and then do final lines and color on PC.
As for your solidworks knowledge, as a regular user myself, I can tell you that it will give you huge advantage with couple exercises in lesson 2 and with perspective and construction understanding in general. Sorry but no specific suggestion for your r34 art, except to just finish draw a box as it will give you the necessary building blocks to be able to draw anything later on.
Your next step should be the 250 box challenge.
See ya in the later lessons!