rajivfonia

http://imgur.com/gallery/F3zbnFQ

Thanks for such a timely and detailed review.

I did try to apply the perspective in the arrows, but the picture got uploaded reverse. I will keep that in mind and try improve upon that.

I did solve the cactus problem with lines. Will try to solve it with cast shadows.

Oh. I forgot that minor axis. Will keep in mind.

Thanks for the detailed review. Please find the link with revisions.

http://imgur.com/gallery/R2hm1Xa

Will work on the feedback given.

Nice job. Marking as complete.

Ghosting lines need more shoulder with confidence as the lines are a bit wobbly.

Could have drawn more lines in the super imposition challenge. Fill out the page more.

Other than that it looks good.

First of all congrats for completing the daunting challenge.

I will mark it as complete although there is room for improvement. In the starting the perspective is bit flat which comes off better in the later boxes. Extend your lines more to check if the perspective is right.

1st of you can draw some boxes bigger filling only 4-5 boxes per page and some only one box per page.

2nd give more line weight to the outside form.

3rd draw more from the shoulder with confident strokes as the lines are not coming as straight. Practice the straight lines drawing with shoulders.

4th practice more ghosting before putting mark down.

5th put more thought into the perspective of the box, thinking about how it looks before putting the mark down.

Sure.

thanks for such detailed review. excited to start on lesson 2.

Thanks