7:10 PM, Tuesday July 16th 2024
Thank you for your critique !!! And thanks for your work ????????
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pimpoum
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5:46 AM, Wednesday June 12th 2024
Hi Uncomfortable,
Thanks for your critique, and yes I did see my perception of drawing ellipses in perspective change towards the end of the challenge which was enjoyable!
10:10 AM, Monday May 27th 2024
Hi Uncomfortable,
Thanks for your reply and corrections. I'll have a reread of the texture section in the light of what you say here.
12:00 PM, Friday May 24th 2024
Hi DIO,
Thanks a lot for your feedback, this is once again very helpful
Have a good day
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10:47 AM, Thursday May 23rd 2024
Hi Ricemipotatoes,
ok so MY understanding is that overshooting or missing the point is expected at the beginning and you improve it overtime (but less than a 100 years).
I didn't have the issue of touching the paper while ghosting and I don't recall any mention of it on the website. I remember seeing a Proko video on "line quality" where he says you can put one of your finger a bit forward so that it touches the paper before the pen nib and prevents this issue. I do something similar with my auricular which slides on the paper before I make the mark. I don't know if this is Drawabox approved though ????
3:02 PM, Saturday April 13th 2024
Hi DIO,
Thanks a lot that‘s very clear
Have a good day!
1:14 PM, Saturday April 13th 2024
Hi DIO thanks a lot for your very detailed feedback, i have a lot to work on! Thanks for your explanations as well as on cast shadows, i understand that i misunderstood the concept a little
I have a question about « mistakes » -sometimes i draw confidently something which looks « wrong », often biggen than I’d like, and I am tempted to draw inside - that‘s the case with the ant antenna.
Would you advise to still go with the „wrong“ shape? Or to redo the drawing?
8:57 PM, Wednesday March 27th 2024
Hi! Thanks a lot for this second feedback, and it’s duely’noted for the usage of black ????
12:33 PM, Tuesday March 26th 2024
Hi ThatOneMushroomGuy
Thanks a lot for your feedback. Here is my work.
I’v focussed on more simple reference and tried to focus on construction
Have a good day
7:23 AM, Tuesday November 7th 2023
Hi Rob,
thanks a lot for your critique, I feel this is encouraging and it reminds me of how to work with the lines (from the shoulder!).
have a good day
Selim
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