1:15 PM, Tuesday November 24th 2020
Do note that you did not set where the VP is in the rough perspective, at best I guess it's in the middle on all 3 frames.
The rotated boxes is significantly improved compared to the original. I just recommend you avoid scribbling like that, just draw a few straight diagonal lines (i think it's called hatching) or use a normal pencil to "paint" them. This is so the back lines remain visible and with as little obstruction as possible.
The ellipses look decent, going off a bit more often than failing to touch all four borders, though the majority doesn't have the second or third pass.
I also took a quick glance at your 250 box submission you linked there. It doesn't look like you understood what was asked of you and you just rushed to complete it, similar to your first attempt at the rough perspective.
Next Steps:
You need to do the 250 box challenge, though I don't know if you should redo it fully or partially.
Watch the video instruction or, if you want to see how it should go, check this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owZvXFuy-mw
Basically, you'll be drawing boxes with 3 different vanishing points.