6:34 AM, Monday December 27th 2021
First off I would like to thank you for your post... thank you! As for the contents of the critique, the ghosting part is definitely something I will remain conscious about, especially for the hatching, which I neglected the ghosting for.
As for the heavy use of close vanishing points, that is something I feared straying away from many of the times because I didnt want to make the lines all parallel or diverge, it worked but like you said, my work didnt have many instances of shallow foreshortening, adding a higher concentration of boxes in the later pages didnt help me with that either.
As for the boxes orientation, I felt like I had a hard time coming up with different box orientation ideas, there were many cases which I experimented however it seemed like the last couple of boxes I made. (not helped by the higher number of boxes in the later pages.
I really struggled with the lines converging in pairs. That was something I was conscious about in around box 50 and tried thoughout the rest of the challenge to fix it. Id love to hear any recommendations for it.
I also have no idea what to do next, Ill probably revisit some older parts of lesson one and redo the lessons the older commenter made. As for if I can continue, I have no idea.