MMansalad

Wow! These are real neat! I enjoy your lines, I can see that your strokes are confident yet feel loose at the same time. I'm not sure if it was required as part of the assignment, but it would've been nice if you wrote in what your textures were based off of for the texture on forms exercise. That being said, it looks like you really paid attention to the texture of the object you were observing and implemented them on the form.

By the way, any tips on form intersections? I'm just finishing up lesson 2 and I'm struggling on that. Are you able to just picture how they intersect mentally?

Sorry! Late reply. Personally I find it is a matter of practicing. Also it helps if you can visualize where you draw your line as you're making the arrow. Maybe try ghosting a few times before making your next line.

You have nice aligning curves in yours, but a few them aren't aligned as neatly which throws the viewer off. I tried to show it in the notes where I thought your curves are strong and where it could use improvement. Also, adding some lines in the creases can help identify where the arrow is curving. And careful with the arrowhead...I think you elongate the arrowhead too much. Hopefully this helps.

https://imgur.com/a/Azyanio

Hey there! I'm on this lesson now and a few things I've noticed while practicing arrows lots and comparing them to the lesson examples. In the example, you'll notice how the curves and angles of the arrows align with each other. This way, when the lines are draw in to connect the curves, it's clear where the arrow is changing directions and what not. It gives the arrow that clean, sweeping look. I tried to show the aligning curves in this image.

https://imgur.com/a/ovEHWLM

Will do, I'll do them in my warm ups and post some in the community for feedback. Thank you!

Sorry try this link

https://imgur.com/a/942mktE

[https://imgur.com/a/mRVn0jn][https://imgur.com/a/mRVn0jn]

Thanks for reviewing!! Much appreciate your time to go over my boxes. Still having a hard time making sure my lines converge to the vanishing point.

Thank you so much for the feedback! I don't know why I redraw lines, I'm not even sure where I picked up that habit from. I definitely see where things get busy and I'll practice not redrawing my lines.

Thanks again!