MEANDI

Hey!

First of all thank you for this in-depth feedback, I did some note taking based on it and I took a second look at the lesson 4 feedback as you mentioned as well. Also I will not do any more official homework on my sketchbook, I will stick to printer paper in the future and in this revision.

Here is the actual homework.

https://imgur.com/a/9wkzHsF

I've added a third page to Organic intersections, because I felt that the first page was full of mistakes and I didn't do my best work. And also I have added some detail to the head fur of the lion, even though you said not to add any detail, I felt that the whole mass ballon around his head looked really weird, so I added some.

Now that being said, these animal pages are not my first attempts at those given days. When I was working I usually did around 1-2 failed attempts pages and just started over, because I wanted to show my best efforts on these given revisions. Let me know if that's okay to do or if I should always just show my "first shots" in the homework. I will attach my failed attempts if you want to look at them here however: https://imgur.com/a/neohafm

Also I went on a trip just after I got your feedback, so when I was there I still decided to do some drawings on my sketchbook (I didn't want to take all the printer paper haha) I still did some animal studies while I was there (Note that this was before I started doing actual homework) I didn't shy away on adding texture on some of these, because these were just for fun. Anyway, I thought I might add them here if you want to take a look:

https://imgur.com/a/J9qJl1w

That being said feel free to completely ignore the second and the third links and just give the feedback on the actual homework revisions.

All that being said, I still feel that I did a bunch of mistakes even on my actual homework, so if it is for the best I am more then welcome to do more of these revisions.

Thank you so much,

Saulius

Thank you! I definitely agree with you, these prompts are very cool way to challenge your creative muscles!

Thanks! Definitely, frankenstein's monster has these super thick eyebrows, that's why it's similar :D

thnx!

Thank you Captain!

Thank you!!

Hey! :)

That is a very in depth critique and I appreciate it very much. I will try incorporate the things you talked about in my next exercises.

Thank you!

Saulius

Thank you! I just want to say that I feel so much improvement overall, this course is a godsend haha.

I will try to make adjustments based on your feedback in the lesson 4!

Thank you for the feedback, Tofu!

Yeah I think that it's a great idea. Just remember to draw another one without tracing after. This way you will deepen the understanding about the subject.