11:31 PM, Thursday December 10th 2020
Hi Optimuserik, nice to meet you.
Like you, I just finished my 250 box challenge, it was tough, like the current times, so I understand that you stumbled.
First, I'd like to say that you sense of perspective y really nice. Although you seem to correct your lines, is clear that you understand how perspective works.
I suggest you two things. First, try to add some shadow to you drawing, it is really helpfull for give the sense of depth. And the other thing is that you can add more wight, make the outline edges a little more thicker to give the sense of solidity.
I´m just adding a little things because I totally agree on Raulillos's review. Specially on attempting the same line or trying to correct the stroke and the projection of the lines that you already drew.
I will no repeat the things that raulillo already said but I would add more work on the boxes. I siggest that, in your warmups, try to do a pair of boxes and projected with the correction that we have writed.
Good luck and keep the good work
Next Steps:
Warmups of two or more boxes with projetion.
Keep to the second lesson.