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11:17 PM, Friday March 25th 2022
interesting character concept to me,
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Jwala
Basics Brawler
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jwala's Sketchbook
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11:14 PM, Friday March 25th 2022
warm and friendly Now, but does it goes cold and sour with time ( ??? )
3:40 PM, Wednesday March 23rd 2022
with all due respect
don't leave a vague review on anyones homework.
if you don't have time to commit, you really don't have to
~ yours jwala
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11:50 AM, Monday March 14th 2022
Greetings Pikes , I reviewed your homework and here are my observations;
1 super imposed lines
it's consistent
but lines suffer from *C* curve.2 ghosted lines
lines are fraying in begining an at end3 ghosted planes
taking a picture before you draw ellipses over planes is adviced.
planes are constructed better with each attempt, that's a good start.4 table of ellipse
gets better with each attempt5 elipse on planes
consistent6 funnels
major axis is slanted7 plotted perspcetive
over shooting guidelines.8 rough perspective
decent attempt9 rotated boxes
very well executed 10 organic perspective
draw boxes with varied dimensions if you may.major take aways
fix the C curve in the strokes
if you are tired don't rush to the end of the homework. take rest and resume when recharged.
Next Steps:
start 250 Box challenge
make variations of dimensions and stray from making isometric boxes
6:03 AM, Monday March 7th 2022
well performed Sir Vintages
Next Steps:
250 box challenge
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10:06 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
Greetings Vintages , I reviewed your homework and here are my observations;
1 super imposed lines
short lines are quite good,
but extended lines suffer from *S* curve.2 ghosted lines
very little overshooting,
long lines still have curves.3 ghosted planes
taking a picture before you draw ellipses over planes is adviced.
planes are constructed better with each attempt, that's a good start.4 table of ellipse
gets better with each attempt5 elipse on planes
second stroke is consistently shortter than first one,
try not to tighten the arm in attempt to follow the previous path of ellipse 6 funnels
don't make the funnels too convex7 plotted perspcetive
good as supposed to be.8 rough perspective
decent attempt9 rotated boxes
if an mistae is made don't redraw over it to fix it.10 organic perspective
draw boxes with varied dimensions if you may.major take aways
fix the S curve in the strokes
don't over draw to fix mistakes
if you are tired don't rush to the end of the homework. take rest and resume when recharged.
Next Steps:
please take your time to fix s curve
repeat the ellipse on planes worksheets
8:27 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
thankyou kind @ASTRIS0
i'll do my best to understand how space and distance affects objects, i feel grateful for you
taking the time to critique my homework for lesson 1
yours
~ Jwala
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