jasonmagave

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jasonmagave's Sketchbook

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    12:09 AM, Friday September 29th 2023

    This is pretty good!

    Some observations

    1) Texture Analysis

    For me, it is not clear the transition in contrast. I see too much contrast in the end

    2) Dissections

    I think you should make textures go a little more out the silhouette

    In my opinion you're ready to go to the next lesson :D

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    2:08 PM, Monday April 10th 2023

    Hi, can you be more specific? What boxes are missing?

    1:25 PM, Monday April 10th 2023

    Hi! Your comments and observations were incredibly valuable to me, and I am truly thankful for your time and input. I will upload the pages that i forgotten

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    11:18 PM, Thursday February 2nd 2023

    Hi, it is my first feedback. I hope that it helps :D

    Superimposed Lines:

    I think the lines need to be more precise, connecting one point to another.

    Ghosted Lines:

    The lines are pretty great in my opinion. My suggestion is to try longer lines.

    Ghosted Planes:

    Maybe you can vary the angle of the planes a little.

    Ellipses in Planes:

    The circles are too far outside the square, and the curve lines are separated from each other.

    Table of Ellipses:

    The lines are sometimes wobbly, and the lines forming the ellipses are too far apart from each other.

    Funnels:

    I think the ellipses are a little too far apart from each other.

    Plotted Perspective:

    I have nothing to comment on here.

    Rough Perspective:

    In the first exercise, we see some lines going in the opposite direction of the VP, but in others, we see that they tend to go in the same direction. I think using the ghost method to make the cube lines converge to the VP point helps a lot.

    Rotated Boxes:

    It's pretty good actually. Maybe the boxes could be a little more uniform in size.

    Organic Perspective:

    Sometimes the box lines go in different directions and don't converge to a point, making it difficult to see which boxes are in front and which are behind.

    Next Steps:

    In my opinion, its time to 250 boxes challenge.

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