Wow, thank you so much. I wasn't expecting such a detailed response, and so quickly.

I'm glad to hear my line control isn't that bad. I think working digitally all the time has had a really negative effect on me when it comes to this stuff. I've already seen progress though from where I stared so I'll just have to keep at it.

Looking back at it I think you're absolutely right about the ellipses. I think it was in the 'How to draw a box 2' video, Uncomfortable points out trying to fix mistakes over and over will just draw attention to them. That seems to be very true and it's something I need to keep in mind.

So I need to keep working on confidence and my accuracy will improve over time with that. I think that's the main thing I really need to drill into my brain.

Next time I'll make sure to get feedback before moving on. I think it was just me putting off showing my mistakes to other people, but I think you're absolutely right that knowing my mistakes is exactly what I need to improve, so the more I can learn before moving forward, the better.

You've also proven to me that taking the time to ask for feedback is absolutely worth it. I really appreciate you helping me out.