I really dont know what else to add other than what Vega said.
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I think you did very good :) hop on lesson 4
Overall very good job, the only thing i would like to mention is that there isnt much difference between your leaf texture analysis and the close up, and that the forms in the dissesction exercise dont look as good as the organic forms. Your arrows are really cool and so does your intersections. Good work!
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I think you can move to lesson 3 and why not, start the 250 box challenge if you didnt yet
Pretty good! The organic forms with countour lines 1 could have had more variety and different angles on it but over all good work! Very good intersections!
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Next up, the 250 boxes challenge and Lesson 3???? good luck!
You did so well! Maybe the form intersection are not that visible next time use a different color for the parts that intersect
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I recommend you start doing the 250 boxes challenge itll help you a A LOT with drawing.. anything really!
Omg yes, i meant 250 cylinders???? and im sorry i didnt explained well although i wanted to give you a proper response. My exercise is not very good im insecure with my lines lately i would rather take a look at what uncomfortable drew for the lesson
Hello. So only recently Ive noticed your lesson 2 doesnt have a review yet so im looking forward on that.
Here youve done better this time (please dont misunderstand im not very good at ellipses either) but i still dont see the minor axis of the ellipses as correct. Heres an example,the minor axis is with orange.
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1KyD3IJ0vcO-bUFnsPmDoJ66P3dPMf7zs. The minor axis indicate the orientation of the ellipse and i dont see that on the branches page, theyre supposed to have a flow, like an object in space so they seem flat here. Remember to do your best to use your shoulder as uncomfortable says. If necesary consider watching the first video of his for the ellipses
I highly recommend you to begin the 250 ellipse challenge itll help you alot with perspective and orientation.Its gonna take a long time but be patient its worth it. I hope you understand what i said and good luck! Drawabox exercises are literally the best when it comes to flow confident beautiful lines i always come back to do them????
Thank you so much for the review and these notes! Theyre very helpful indeed!
Hello. I think you should redo the leaves and branches pages. The ellipses dont seem to follow the structure and it seems rushed and as a warm up, I recommend you to do again 1 page table of ellipses, 1 page of ellipses in planes and 1 with funnels. I love how you drew the cactuses and potato plant though! Good luck!
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A warm up that consist of 3 pages with funnels, ellipses in planes and table with ellipses
1 page with leaves and one with branches
I extended the lines where there were none and I made the extra 25 boxes. Here its the link to it
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1IPqMHjX3QjTBeMflIAHYC-473HI2ksbt
Hi! Idk what you mean by repost. I did reposted the complete homework (on g drive not imgur) and has been critiqued and I leveled up since then(lvl 3 currently) .
Is there a way to delete a post? I didnt find it. Sorry about that
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