haitrinhbach

Firstly good job on completing lesson ,

But there are a few critical aspects

Lines

I had no problem with your lines, they were drawn confidently and fairly accurately, you did a great job

Ellipses

your ellipses where drawn through 2 to 3 times so you clearly understand what uncomfy said to some degree already. Plus your accuracy on the ellispes is great, good job on that!

Boxes

you drew the boxes very confidently,good job

now im gonna give you a tip that i always use when drawing boxes in perspective

o remember when you draw boxes in perspective avoid drawing lines parallel lines because those lines gonna convert to each other at some point ( keep in mind: for 1 point perspective the horizontal and vertical lines should be parallel and for 2 point perspective only the vertical line will be parallel )

there is one tips that i usally do when drawing boxes in perspective manually is ghosting the line from the start to the vanishing point that way can help you have more sense of where the line should go, of course this method wont makes your lines 100% accurate ( also remember ghosting help you to see the line without draw it on the paper, that will help you to know where there line should go and how it would look if you draw it on the paper so ghosting is very important)

not lets go to the conclusion of your work

_what i love about your work is your line confident, they are really great

_dont stress your self out too much about the perspective exercise because perspective is a difficult thing to understand at first so dont worry too much and you can have a chance to practice perspective in 250 boxes challenge

Firstly good job on completing lesson

But there are a few critical aspects

Lines

I had no problem with your lines, they were drawn confidently and fairly accurately, you did a great job

Ellipses

your ellipses were drawn pretty messy because you drew over the circle adn ellipses more than 2-3 times and lack of confident, one other thing you should keep in mind is to draw withyour whole arm not with your wrist (why: draw with your wrist can limit the size of circle that you can draw but your elbow and shoulder dont limit your circle size, your line length as well). However, some of your circle and ellipses look very great and solid so keep on practice bro

Boxes

your line on boxes are not as great as your line home work, i think its understandable because this is the first time you draw boxes in perspective now im gonna give you a tips that i always think about when drawing boxes in perspective

when you draw boxes in perspective avoid drawing lines parallel lines because those lines gonna convert to each other at some point ( **keep in mind: for 1 point perspective the horizontal and vertical lines should be parallel and for 2 point perspective only the vertical line will be parallel )

to enhance your line quality i think you should ghost the line more (the ghosting technique). because you cant imagine the line inside your head right now so ghosting can help you know where the line should go and how it would look when you draw it on the paper

not lets go to the conclusion of your work

_ the main propblem you should pay attention to is your line quality, dont draw over the line too much when drawing boxes and you should ghost the line more

good luck with your 250 boxes challenge (^o^)/

Firstly good job on completing lesson ,

Lines

I had no problem with your lines, they were drawn confidently and fairly accurately, you did a great job

Ellipses

your ellipses where drawn through 2 to 3 times so you clearly understand what I've said to some degree already. Plus your accuracy on the ellispes is really, good job on that!

Boxes

you clearly understand the basic of perspective, very good. You work is amazing so i really dont have anything much to say about it so instead i will give you some tips about drawing boxes in perspective that i know

when you draw boxes in perspective avoid drawing lines parallel lines because those lines gonna convert to each other at some point ( keep in mind: for 1 point perspective the horizontal and vertical lines should be parallel and for 2 point perspective only the vertical line will be parallel )

there is a tips that i always do when drawing boxes in perspective manually is ghosting the line from the start to the vanishing point that way can help you have more sense of where the line should go and of course this method wont makes your lines 100% accurate

not lets go to the conclusion of your work

_what i love about your work is your line confident, you did a really great good job

good luck with your 250 boxes challenge

first congratulation for complieting the exercise for lesson 1

lines

its great seeing you not Fraying on both ends but your lines are pretty wobbling, its understandable since you are just beginning to learn how to draw so lack of confident is a normal thing and over time your you be able to draw straight line the more you practice it

I assume you've read through the text but I'll remind you, uncomfomy sayid when your lines tend to curve up or down, you should intentionally curve them in the opposite direction

Ellipses

your ellipses where drawn through 2 to 3 times so you clearly understand what uncomfy said to some degree already plus your accuracy on the Ellipses in Planes and funnel ellipses are fairy accurate, good job on that. however your tables of Ellipses werent as great, you shouldnt draw with for wrist because that will limit the size of the circle you can draw so thats why you should draw with your whole arm

Boxes

you clearly understand the basic of perspective and your line confident is better than before , very good. Nice try drawing sphere inside your boxes but that is pretty difficult for you to handle so for now just draw boxes and try to understand it ( to learn how to draw circle/ellipses and cylinder in perspective first we should learn how to draw boxes).

When it comes to draw boxes without the horizon line your perspective is very bad.

when you drawing boxes in perspective avoid drawing parallel lines because those lines gonna convert to each other at some point and that point is called vanishing point ( keep in mind: for 1 point perspective the horizontal and vertical lines should be parallel and for 2 point perspective only the vertical line will be parallel )

thats all i have to say, if you have any question feel free to ask me

Firstly good job on completing lesson ,

But there are a few critical aspects

Lines

I had no problem with your lines, they were drawn confidently and fairly accurately, you did a great job

Ellipses

your ellipses where drawn through 2 to 3 times so you clearly understand what I've said to some degree already. Plus your accuracy on the ellispes is really, good job on that!

Boxes

some of your lines are pretty wobbly maybe its because you drew them slowly and lack of confident.

One thing to remember is that when you draw boxes in perspective avoid drawing lines parallel lines because those lines gonna convert to each other at some point ( keep in mind: for 1 point perspective the horizontal and vertical lines should be parallel and for 2 point perspective only the vertical line will be parallel )

but dont worry too much about your accuracy at first and focus more on line confident

• there is one tips that i usally do when drawing boxes in perspective manually is ghosting the line from the start to the vanishing point that way can help you have more sense of where the line should go, of course this method wont makes your lines 100% accurate

not lets go to the conclusion of your work

_what i love about your work is your line confident, they are really great good job man

_dont stress your self out too much about the perspective exercise because perspective is a difficult thing to understand at first so dont worry too much and you can have a chance to practice perspective in 250 boxes challenge

_i really dont get it when you said "For the cactus always remember to not leave the construction open ended" so can you give me some kind of example ?

_well this question is totally off topic : its been a few months since i posted my drawing lesson 2 and right now im at lesson 5 already but i havent got any critique for lesson 2 and 4 so should i keep waiting or send it to discord ?

_anyway thank you so much for critiquing my drawing i havent got any for a few months now ;-;

here are my extra drawings:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1-CHHSb1yHheShGMb5nlJExOv2uA4dn2k?usp=sharing

I'm just a beginner so I'm not here to critique your drawing, sorry for making you think you'll have some criticism

anw your drawings are very inspiring, im looking forward to achieve your level: >>

wow your art is so amazing :0, i wonder how long have you been drawing seriously

thank you VERY MUCHHHH SIR

wow, thank you so much, I thought no one would care to critique my work

really THANK YOU!!!!!