4:01 PM, Friday August 20th 2021
yes, they look good and consistent according to the laws of perspective, the flow is just a little bit off (but that will come with practice). the shading in some places is inconsistent, you know the spaces between shading sticks are big and different.
organic forms (ellipses): to me they look nice, just there are too many ellipses, which i noticed is not good, 3-4 (sometimes 5 if the sausage is long) ellipses are enough. also, seems like you aren't drawing the ellipses from the arm judging that they look wobbly. i recommend making "tables of ellipses" exercise (lesson 1) as a warm up.
organic forms (lines): here the sausages look well, again i recommend sticking to few counter lines on the sausage/
texture (studies): here you did excellent. i can't say any critique tbh.
texture (organic forms): they also look very good. you sticked to the rule that on the outer spaces of sausage the texture should get smaller and smaller.
intersections: man, i suck at them, so i can't give proper critique, but the forms themsevles look solid.
organic intersections: look very nice to me, maybe try to add more casted shades.
well, relax and go to the lesson 3!