etcetera

https://imgur.com/a/8H2Rbec

Thanks a lot. Hope I did it correctly.

Didn't you mean the axis line through the cylinder? I did one on each in black.

...Ok going back to the my first lesson to play a game of spot the difference I think I see what you meant. I forgot that center line on each color. I guess in re reading the lesson I must have skimmed that part and overlooked it.

Would it be alright if I applied the correction to the last set that I already drew? I understand if not but my brain does kind of hurt from drawing so many cylinders.

https://imgur.com/a/ssVsNZA

Ok thanks. Im not entirely sure I understand what you meant in your explanation of the difference in foreshortening between the two circles. Are you saying that the cirle facing the viewer has a more extreme angle or the one facing away?

[https://imgur.com/a/JsLcEMy]

Thank you taking the time for another detailed critique.

Regarding the sausage forms I know I need to keep in mind that both ends are the same. I Definitely will get distracted in the act of trying to find shapes and not give the ones I'm drawing the focus it deserves.

Are there any particular demos I should revisit before moving on. (since it seems like this is the last lesson using organic forms?)

Thanks for the critique, that's a lot of things to work on. I think I understand a little better what you've meant about adding 3d shapes on top of each other.

I know I'm still having issues with line accuracy when doing my ghosted lines. Is there anything I can do to address this?

Thank you for the in depth critique. I really apprecfiate the actionable steps included. I feel like I made a lot of progress on these redraws alone. New attempt.