https://imgur.com/a/QaLF3t9

For this revision, i definitely took more notice of my use of contour line and multiple forms wrapping against each ither and tried fleshing out legs more accurately with the muscles and stuff that goes around them. if im being honest, even though i am taking more time to plan and ghost my marks, I still dont think im putting enough time as i should into ghosting. Ill try increasing the amount of focus i put into every stroke.