https://imgur.com/2FjV9Wp

Here I think is the missing page. For some reason it was left out of the album that I posted.

Thank you for your feedback. If I might add a little bit of my own self critique, I agree that confidence in my lines is a struggle. I'd love to just commit when I put down a line on a page, but sometimes I am either unsure of where I am going or I have a hard time imagining how far to take it. This takes practice, I'm sure.

Could you expand on Boxes no. 3 for me (what you wrote about)? There were a few where I made the mistake you linked, but I think my biggest issue was understanding the frame of reference to line things up. You said this line "you need to be more organised to what where goes what" what does that mean? What advice do you have to figure out where certain boxes ought to go (the corner boxes in the rotated boxes are particularly tricky)? How do I line them up as they ought to vs guessing using the semi-parallel lines like the lesson suggests?