cloudstrife0142

Here's the revisions https://imgur.com/a/d1h5eUT

Here's my revisions, I tried implementing the more "additive" construction approach.

https://imgur.com/a/T2ewV5h

https://imgur.com/a/24wHObi

Here's my revisions. For the second plant picture, my ellipses got so hairy that it's kind of hard to tell how I was trying to construct the pot, so I included a little MS paint picture showing what I was trying to do. I limited each ellipse to two passes but the concentric ones bleed into each other.

I know it's been a while, I took a break from drawabox. I want to get back into it though. I've been doing lesson 1/2 exercises over the past few months to get my draftmanship back up to speed. I figure I should probably just do this whole lesson over (with your critique in mind) since its been so long. Is that alright or would you want me to start further back? Thanks

Thanks for the detailed critique, and here's the 2 pages of form intersections: https://imgur.com/a/cy05oUB

I feel more confident when drawing my lines after following your advice, ellipses are still a bit of a wildcard though. Also I tried some more ambitious intersections on the 2nd page to mixed results.