AhmedHassan021

hi you have done good job with branches but keep in mind what i said before

daisy demo u still not enclosed the leaf and some lines are wobbly and not drawn with confidant but overall its good just keep in mind what i said i see u forgot but its better than the first one

pothos the lines need more confidant as i see some wobble lines u need to close the leaf also here to the flow line i would recommand to observe ref and draw many times as u need to breack and solve each proplem noo need to interpret again what u solved just to have confidance so i need to see also one plant with leaf

https://imgur.com/a/NxF6Npl its just its end of the day i draw when i finish my job and my university

https://imgur.com/a/I1xTbMj hi this my rev sorry if not good as u expect from me but today was tough so this what i could please make me pass this time

https://imgur.com/a/BMkRZ2T okay thanks how about now then

no its okay i need to find right speed and exercise what next

by the way

hi elodin thank u so much for this

https://imgur.com/a/nD4l8DX

great job u did nice job but in the future push more the perspective i think u did great job well done

Hello I’ll be handling the critique for your lesson 3 homework.

Organic Arrows :

-Starting with the organic arrows you are doing some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon and you’ve also drawn your marks with confidence. It seems that you are both aware of how the arrow gets wider as it moves closer to the viewer, and the fact that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon decreases as it moves further away. I don’t really have anything to call out here but keep aware of the negative space The main issue here though is that you are not aware that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon should decrease as it moves further away, as shown here ( https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/011d064f.jpg ), this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional

Leaves

-Moving on to the leaves you are doing a good job with the first two steps, that is drawing the flow line and the edges for the silhouette. and one important step and that is drawing the edge details,

Branches :

-Moving on to the branches I think that you may followed the instructions as best as you could have.

there is not much to address here great job

daisy demo please make sure u close the leaf well and draw with flow line and the flow line need to be draw with confidancce and adhere to it

please include your ref images

excellent job move one but please 1 page arrow

Hello I’ll be handling the critique for your lesson 3 homework.

Organic Arrows :

-Starting with the organic arrows you are doing some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon and you’ve also drawn your marks with confidence. It seems that you are both aware of how the arrow gets wider as it moves closer to the viewer, and the fact that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon decreases as it moves further away. I don’t really have anything to call out here but keep aware of the negative space let’s move on to the next section.

Leaves :

-Moving on to the leaves you are doing a good job with the first two steps, that is drawing the flow line and the edges for the silhouette. and one important step and that is drawing the edge details,

Branches :

try forking

-Moving on to the branches I think that you may followed the instructions as best as you could have.

there is not much to address here great job

great job with dissection i like your economic use of strokes and the texture shadows well done

nice job with texture analysis it really have 3d form

the crumble paper sorry if u misunderstand i mean to make the three part one copy and notes and other construction texture from what u opserved (copy) one so i need to see one from dense to sparse and notes

nice job with organic forms

form intersection drawn well with confidance but need minor axis for cone

i see u over shad the intersected part some look like mess but next time try to see pinned post of this and draw them in same size and full page like demo hw u need more grasp of this

Organic Arrows

Starting by the organic arrows they are drawn with a good deal of confidence, which helps to capture the fluidity with which they move through space

your making some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon but push more. The main issue here though is that you are not aware that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon should decrease as it moves further away, as shown here ( https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/011d064f.jpg ), this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional. this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional.

you are on the right track keep pushing

there is one thing i want to adress back then to organic intersection i forgot to see another page in revsion so please back to the notes and read it and find the mistakes and try to think of it clearly