It all looks great ????
Your rotated boxes exercise is your weakest out of all of the exercises. It would be good to do it as a warm up.
Next Steps:
https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes
Move on to the 250 box challenge
You did it digitally, but since this is a community critique it isn't a big deal, however it is recommended you do the exercises traditionally with fineliners.
https://drawabox.com/lesson/0/4/why
Besides that every else looks good.
Next Steps:
https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes
Move on to the 250 box challenge
Your ghosted lines look good
Your super imposed lines look good
Your ghosted planes and ellipses look good, but it looks like you may have switched from fine liner to something else, this is a community critique so it isn't a big deal, though it is recommended that you stick with fine liners.
Your table of ellipses look good, but are a bit empty and rushed
Your funnels seem rushed as well
Your plotted perspective looks great????
Your rough perspective seems rushed and is incomplete
Your rotated boxes exercise is incomplete and needs more boxes
Your organic perspective looks decent.
Next Steps:
Redo rough perspective exercise and review it's material. The same goes for rotated boxes exercise.
It all mostly looks great. The organic perspective, and rotating boxes seem to be your weakest points. Since this is a community critique using pencil is fine, but using fineliners for anything after is recommended. From the pictures I have seen I believe you understand the material well enough to move on.
Next Steps:
I think your ready to move on to the 250 box challenge.
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