YugenYada

good work, there are a few things i would like to point out though

with your branches i feel like you should have taken it a bit slower and ghosted a bit more over the old lines especially around the areas with curves.

sometimes your lines get a bit dense in your construction so i would recommend more line weight on the lines that are in the front/not overlapping

and finally i would say to keep a closer eye on proportions i would recommend to measure from the top of the page down,

also don't beat yourself up over the potato plant it happens to all of us

overall i think you did pretty good

-Arrows

i noticed that some of your shading is backwards so i would recommend finishing it entirely and then shading it

i also notice that near the end of your arrows the lines start to curve so I'd watch out for that,

-Leaves

pretty good, i would say to pay more attention to how the details/textures wrap around the form in 3d space

-Branches

pay more attention to how your ellipses turn in 3d

ghost over the lines that you already made more

-Plants

You were supposed to do more of your own without using the videos

overall they're pretty good though but i would recommend you draw bigger

some of your textures are kind of dense so i would focus more on the shadows

thanks i'll be sure to add them to my warm-ups

honestly really disappointed in myself i wasn't really able to do better but i understand more now,

if this is still not good enough i will gladly do another revision. https://imgur.com/NGTLhME

i got a lot of help from this https://youtu.be/VEct8qwybXU?t=2

it looks like you understand boxes pretty well

I don't know if your pen is going out or if your not holding it high enough but try to hold it at a higher angle for your ellipses and try to execute a bit faster.

for arrows try to do less ink in the background and thicker as it comes to the viewer also try to think about how the lines would be closer in the background and spread out as they come closer to the viewer, also execute your hatching on them from the shoulder ghosting through them.

ellipses are good but a bit messy probably take a bit more time (i feel like you got this by the time you got to your textures)

textures are really good but i would recommend to out-line them even if they're small

and try to make shadows wrap a bit more on your sausages

good work.

Overall really good work, i wish you had done some studies outside of the demos though,

try adding line weight to you arrows (thin in the background and thicker as it comes closer to the viewer)

maybe a bit more focus on the shadows in textures

very good ellipses and line economy

good flow on the leaves but i think you should try to apply a bit more of the fundamentals of the arrows exercise to them

overall i would say to just really focus on how much ink you use on lines and kinda stray away from making them all the same size really good work though

Thank you

i screwed up on my arrows by not keeping the distance between consistent but i don't know if i should do it again. also sorry it took me so long to reply https://imgur.com/a/WCrpAyl

Very solid work all around,

A few things though

1. line weight on arrows should be localized to the bends

2. I think you should focus more on drop shadows for your dissections

3. also try to do 2 different textures for the inside and outside of the dissections

4. for the form intersections shade the face of the shape that faces the viewer i think that would make it look a lot more solid

5. more shadows for the organic intersections

Over all though really good work.