THANK YOU SO MUCH MY FRIEND!!! I'm so filled with joy that i was able to get a critique for this lesson, i often work in a vacuum with other courses, however karim ("uncomfortable") often tells us we shouldn't work this way and that it can be detrimental to our progress, so i'm constantly looking for critiques now Haha.

Reading the text it was super cool because of how you gave me steps to move forward and how i can improve.

I'll simply just come back to this in the future to become a better creator, when it comes to construction and texture.

And i will definitely be going to go back and outline those tricky construction lines i left out asap :)

Anyway thanks so much for giving me such a great critique i hope one day i too will be able to provide others with help such as this.

Have a lovely day my friend and best of luck with all your creative endeavors.