Wires

Hi here are my revisions you asked for. I have tried to intake your critique the best i can. i should have taken more time on the back grounds for these as well. I did not want to do the Grasshopper but took it as an opportunity to challenge myself. Please let me know if you would like me to practice this lesson more and what to work on.

Thank You, Wires

https://imgur.com/a/jfKVRvU

Hi here are my revision for this lessons. I personally think i still struggle with the branches the most out of all these exercises so i will be putting more emphasis on it in practice. https://imgur.com/a/nW2E0Vm

Hi, Thanks for the really in depth critique i will make sure to work on all the points you've listed above and go through this lessons material a bit more throughly on the exercises i need to work on.

Thanks again,

Wires.

Hey Rabuuhs, I greatly appreciate the in-depth critique sorry if my reply is vague.

I’m going to stop re-drawing immediately as it’s a terrible habit, I think I knew sub consciously, but I needed to hear it thanks. I’m also going to try and better use the resources and not to stress on the result as much as I have been. Also, you are correct that I’ve done a lot of these exercise and in doing so lost the point of them. Ill be going over your critique of my work before I do these exercises again and make a list of what I should be thinking about and striving for.

Below I have attached the 1 page of ghosted planes revision trying my best to apply what you brought up in the critique. I had to stop myself from doing it again. Moving forward I’m going to work on what you’ve listed and apply it to my work. Once again I greatly appreciate any current and future feedback.

https://imgur.com/a/bh7bOjN

Thanks, Wires.