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thats perfect, everything is alright, good job

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Organic Arrows

• this ones were great there you follow all the rules, (perspective and overlaping) so this one is great

Organic Forms

• here the first one were ok, but theres one problem, you didnt draw trought elipses (https://drawabox.com/lesson/2/5/drawthroughellipses), and also you didnt vary the degrees maybe its my perspective, but i think mostly all of them have the same degree, but for the other page, you did everything great so that one is perfect

texture analysis

• yeah, everything here is altright, just one thing, the black line at the left it should be camouflaged with the environment, but other than that this one is perfect, good job

dissections

• here everything is alright, in fact, it was cool to watch it and also you followed the rules here

form intersections

• here its also perfect everything, even the spheres, so great job

organic intersections

• this one is also great, it really seems like a 3d space, so good job in this one too

hey, english is not my first lenguage if you dont understand something let me know, ill explain it differently, also ill appreciate a review of my work, try to do it honestly even if its rough

hi amerain 123

Organic Arrows

• from what im watching you did understand the concept pretty well, you did apply perspective so its alright

Organic Forms

• the first ones were great the degree changes and everything is fine, but the second ones, some ovals do have that "overshoot", but the majority doesnt, that overshoot is more for your perspective, for understanding that what youre drawing is a contour some partial x rays so that overshoot is important, so try to start with the ghosting method for an oval and also start with an overshoot, also in the second one almost all have the same degree, for example if in your first drawing you try (in your mind), to eliminate the other half of the oval to only get the "surface contour", youll see that some are more "curvier" than the other, this is because they all have different degrees

texture analysis

• this one is pretty good, you didnt have any mistake here, you did the transition, also you didnt draw rhe forms only the shadows, so everything here is alright

dissections

• this one is amazing, i did love the pineapple, this one is amazing

form intersections

• this one is great, the only thing is that you didnt fill the page, you made like a path where you did put all the figures, but i think you did understand the concept, so this one is ok, also you applied the line weight in all the perimeter more than locally where the line touches others, but other than those two things i dont see anything wrong

organic intersections

• this one is pretty food, everything was right except on some "worms", that their shadow did stick to the form, but otherwise than that, its ok

hey, english is not my first lenguage if you dont understand something let me know, ill explain it differently, also ill appreciate a review of my work, try to do it honestly even if its rough

hi Buroba, thanks for the advice , i did the double because i was confused between sheets and pages but now i know the difference, so thanks for worring about that, and also i learned a lot from your review

https://imgur.com/a/dPGF2Pj

this is the link of the corrections, in the review you usually said that i should revisit ghosted planes, but in the steps you said ghosted lines, so i did those two, and also the page rotating boxes

if its needed i could redo the rotating boxes excercise if im missing something, thank you for being so honest in your review it helped me a lot

Great Job Buroba, hey if it isnt a problem, can you review my work? if you agree try to he as honest as possible, and srry if its too much i got confused between the terms of sheet and pages, so if you dont want to thats valid too, thanks :3

i personally think that youre ready for the 250 box challenge, but i saw another send you some corrections, and those seem pretty acurate so i would recommend you to complete those first :3

hi Buroba, thanks for submitting your work of lesson 1

i took a fast glance at your work and its pretty accurate, its amazing

at first at Super imposed Lines those are pretty sharp and accurate, the only part that i see some wobbling its at the ultra long lines but for the rest they are super impresive, good job, really

on the gosted lines exercise i dont see them, maybe you forgot to upload them

at ghosted planes same, i see your lines are pretty straight, i dont see any problems in them, so good job

at tables of elipses they are following all of the steps required plus they are really sharp and accurate, but some of them are overlapping, the small ones specially but that problem seem to disappear with more practice and confidence you got trought the excercise

at elipses at planes the shape of the elipses are actually pretty sharp, and you seem to be following all the steps i dont see anything bad at them more than the occasional ones (some overlapping or some gaps at the edges), but in general, they are pretty sharp

at funnels, you need to draw the minor axis, but it seems that the others points are alright even the centers are align with the major axis, i dont think here its necessary to redraw anything, just try to dont skip any step

same with plotted perspective, i dont see anything wrong with them, so good job, it was pretty sharp

rough Perspective, they are good, everything seem alright, its kinda amazing to see your improvement, at the end almost all lines were really close to the center, just some wobbling at some boxes but its ok, dont worry

on rotated boxes, youre drawing trough each box and draw all the boxes plus their gaps are consistent and the boxes are pretty sharp, i dont see any errors in this one so good job

and at organic perspective everything seems fine, and almost all the boxes are in a dramatic foreshortening, its amazing

your work really amazed me, good job :3

i hope my review helped you, also pardon me if you didnt understand something, english isnt my first lenguage

hi quepongo, thanks for submitting your work of lesson 1

at first at Super imposed Lines those are pretty sharp and accurate, and they all start from one point so its impressive

on the gosted lines exercise they are also great, they start on one point and ends in almost the same one so good job

at ghosted planes same, the lines are pretty straight and they are super accurate, good job

at tables of elipses some of them are overlapping the bottom of the squares but they all seem great, there forms are pretty defined and you filled the blank spaces with others elipses so that one is excellent too

at elipses at planes the shape of the elipses are fine and they are draw two times, but some of them arent touching the four corners, but it seems you were trying actually it seems that you improve a lot in this one so good job

at funnels, on funnels there are some that arent aling but you correct them almost inmediatly so good job

same with plotted perspective, there were an amazing use of vanishing points so everything is ok

rough Perspective,the lines were pretty straight and you are following all the steps for it so good job

on rotated boxes, youre drawing trough each box and draw all the boxes plus their gaps are consistent so good job

and at organic perspective everything seems fine, and almost all the boxes are in a dramatic foreshortening plus the lines were pretty straight so good job

your work was amazing, good job :3

hi temo, thanks for submitting your work of lesson 1

at first at Superimposed Lines i there are some lines that are fraying at both ends but just in some lines the others seems to be fine, the other page it really have a great improvement, the starter dot its more clearer in that 2nd drawing, thats great, and most of the lines are free of blowing

on the gosted lines exercise it seems to have some arching lines specially at one border of the page, but it seems you gained more confidence while doing the excercise, that allowed you to have more straight lines, but its important to remember to use your shoulder, that way your lines at the border of the page could improve

at ghosted planes in here everything seems alright so good job on that

at tables of elipses i saw your elipses are touching each border of the table, some of them arent uniform, but as you keep doing it they improve and there are some that arent touching each other, and someones are overlapping, im not sure if its because you did it super fast, but try to slow down the pen a bit, not to much, maybe that way the elipses will be more sharp and uniform

at elipses at planes it seems that most of the elipses were circles and they didnt touched the top and dawn borders of the drawing they seems more like circles than elipses, on the other hand , your second attemp they started to look more similar and uniform, and more like elipses but its important to remind that they should touch each edge, but they still have some errors, like some overlaping, but its amazing to see how your confidence changes some things

at funnels, almost everything its good, they are fitting with each other and align with the minor axis, so from my point of view, this one is amazing

same with plotted perspective, there were an amazing use of vanishing points

rough Perspective, at this this its important to remember that the gosting method it will help you at your confidence, some of the lines are wlobbling and also they are repeated, but try to be much more confident at the moment of draw the lines, and maybe less pressure would be amazing

at rotated boxes everything seems alright the only thing its, that at the extreme corners you didnt draw through that boxes

and at organic perspective everything seems fine, in fact the wobbling from other excercises almost disappeared and almost all the boxes are in a dramatic foreshortening