2:55 AM, Friday May 21st 2021
Sorry for the late reply. Thank you very much for reviewing my assignment!
Sorry for the late reply. Thank you very much for reviewing my assignment!
Hey, thank you for your comments and review. I will definitely keep that in mind and be careful about using too much texture in the future!
Thank you for taking the time to look over my assignment and write this review. I really appreciate the effort you put into this. I will keep these points in mind as I work on future assignments! Thank you!
Thank you for your wonder critique. I appreciate you taking the time to look over my submission and write this!
Hi. I think your submission looks really good. I especially like your textures! I'm sorry I can't really think of any criticism to offer as all your pages look pretty solid. I'd say you are ready to move on to Lesson 3!
Next Steps:
Move on to the next lesson!
Hey, no problem I think I did the same thing when I finished lesson 1. I didn't check back for a while haha. No worries! These look good I'll mark it as complete!
Hi, I think everything looks really good, however I noticed that some of the boxes on your organic perspective pages look really distorted. This can happen when the vanishing points are too close together. I suggest revisiting that part of the lesson. One thing that helped me was ploting out the points first to make sure they look right by placing a dot, then using the ghosting method to draw the line. If you watch the video by ScyllaStew at the bottom of that page I believe she demonstrates that method. It worked well for me (you don't have to watch the whole 3 hour video though ;) ).
I'd really like to see you do another page of organic perspective before moving on to 250 boxes and lesson 2 before I mark the lesson as complete.
Next Steps:
Please do 1 more page of organic perspective.
Hey I think this is really good. I really like your elipse pages and I think your organic boxes look really good too. You should move on to 250 boxes and lesson 2.
Next Steps:
Move on to 250 boxes and lesson 2.
I think every thing looks good, one thing I would mention though is that your boxes on the organic perspective exercise have some issues. One thing you can do to improve your boxes is to plan out the lines first by placing a dot then using the ghosting technique to draw the lines. I'd really like to see you to do one more page of Organic Perspective before moving on to 250 boxes.
Next Steps:
Please do one more page of oragnic perspective and use the ghosting technique to draw the lines .
Hi, I'd like to critique your work here.
Your superimposed lines show a lot of fraying throughout. However this should improve with time. I would suggest doing some as a warm-up before you draw every day. Your ghosted lines look good though.
Your planes and elipses also look good, my only comment here would be that some of your elipses look like you are going over the elipse more than 3 times which is discouraged. You should be able to get the right shape in 2-3 lines. However most of them look good. So I am not worried here.
On the organic perspective page, some of your lines are extending past your corners but most of them are okay. One thing you can do to help with this is plane out the line by placing a dot where you want it to end then remember to use ghosting when drawing the line.
Overall I think it looks good though. I think you are ready to move on to 250 boxes, so I will mark the lesson as complete.
Next Steps:
Move on to 250 boxes!
When it comes to technical drawing, there's no one better than Scott Robertson. I regularly use this book as a reference when eyeballing my perspective just won't cut it anymore. Need to figure out exactly how to rotate an object in 3D space? How to project a shape in perspective? Look no further.
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